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It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

How are you tonight Gypsy Darkness washes all your sins. Stars prick your skin like harsh diamonds You remember her red Skirt flared, her white thighs flash Her fingers pulling your hair Do you gypsy...

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

Wonderfully penned!

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

Love the closing to this Louis, very nice.

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

Louis...You keep knocking them out of the park...This is exceptional...and I have become a solid fan of your work...

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

Perfectly penned Louis! Love the read

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It's possible to lie down with the wolf She is natures accepting It's possible to make love to the wind as it screams its purpose Or whispers to the mind of elemental flow It's all there Gypsy just...

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Right on! To concern oneself with death (even while dying) is to cut the throat of life itself. Your voice always enticing thought. Poetry rewards the fearless poet and the reader who's mind is open...

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

the gypsy knows how to live absolutely stunning write pricked always death a final release...XO

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Will you dance? Will you drink your skin Full of life Your post pulses with the rhythm of life and she knows what really matters- oh to have loved huh? Nailed it I see Hugz P

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Louis...this is an exceptional write that speaks to the mind and soul, especially this verse: It's possible she met you To give you love But it matters little that she didn't No other thing will taste...

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

enough...this is a gypsy speaking of himself...finding his life...and the end of it...louis

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its someone elses story but i notice these things...thanks...louis

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

the last para is one that fits a few of my pomes...thanks...louis

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

you see well...louis

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

its a lyric subject...with hard shards...and interdictions of personal faith...brewed in gaudy clothes...louis

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

i like to see nature calling thank you very much...louis

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

Right on! To concern oneself with death (even while dying) is to cut the throat of life itself. worth searching for isnt it...thanks louis

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

without the sytax, haunted...and all the flames burned quick...thank you sweet one louis

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

exactly that...thank you darlin...louis

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Re: It comes Gypsy. ~Placed on MM Mantel~

thanks nicole...who better than to burn the obvious quick but value the end of it all the more but the gypsy...you see very well darlin...thank you...louis

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